Stage I - Set up: Marissa returns home to find her apartment in shambles.
Turning Point #1 - James is injured in an encounter with the unknown intruder.
Stage II - New Situation: Marissa is wanted for murdering a Chinese Counsel.
Turning Point #2 - Change of Plans: Marissa walks back into her old life of espionage.
Stage III - Progress: The body count adds up.
Turning Point #3 - Point of No Return: Marissa is on her way to Mumbai to face Dmitri.
Stage IV - Complications & Higher Stakes: The action is building.
Turning Point #4 - Marissa is captured by Petrov and must work with him to defeat Dmitry.
Stage V - Final Push: Marissa connects with an old friend, Haroon.
Turning Point #5 - Climax: The body count rises.
Stage VI - write the aftermath now.
Target ending: Marissa, an ex-CIA agent, gets revenge on Dmitry, the Russian Mafia leader who killed her former partner.
8 comments:
Marissa is in a witness-protection program, and her name isn't Marissa at all. She's an ex-CIA agent with an international price on her head. James, a resident at neary Mercy Hospital, is falling in love with her, and she is attracted to him. However, after all the running and being terrorized after her CIA partner was killed, she's finally turned into the predator and is out to get her pursuer, Dmitry, a member of the Russian Mafia. There is a battle to the death at last, and she is almost killed but by her wits and wisdom, she manages to foil Dmitry and he makes a fatal slip that causes his own demise. She is at last free, and able to meet James on even grounds.
Thank you for the great story idea! I had to scale it down for our “target” ending. Let’s leave some details and action for the Anglers to generate. Of course, you can always work the extra details into your installments. The story may also have to be somewhat less complex to keep it to a manageable length for Hooks & Storylines. I’ve found that some Anglers shy away from participation when the stories get long. --Skipper
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